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The Pain We'll Never Feel by ~Cleril:iconCleril:



Leave all your memories

Your happiness with me

Come

Let your sadness out

Rip out your hatred too

Don't leave love in there

It's probably the most dangerous

Forget fear

It only holds you back

Curiosity killed the cat

As we all know

Boredom struck us down as well

Put it over there somewhere

Do you feel what I feel?

Right

Nothing

Exciting isn't it?
©2009 ~Cleril
:iconcleril:

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:icondarkemoprincess:
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Let your sadness out

Rip out your hatred too

Don't leave love in there

It's probably the most dangerous


My favorite part of the whole thing because that is something I consciously can't do is let my sadness out and rip my hatred hehe nice poem Matt and it deserves a fave

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~Avalon~:heart:
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:iconcleril:
Thank you very much.

Oh, I put the inspiration in the description now.
:icondarkemoprincess:
You are very welcome and I will go check out the inspiration!

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~Avalon~:heart:
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:iconcleril:
One of your favorite bands I'm sure.
:icondarkemoprincess:
*smiles some* Seether is a pretty good band. It's in my top 20!

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~Avalon~:heart:
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:iconteenyxtinyxtina:
Good use of words, there's some great emotion in them. Why is there a space between every line though, I find it a little distracting when I'm reading it.

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:flagcanada:
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Send me suggestions.
:iconcleril:
It's just how I write.

Thank you for reading and the comment.
:icondreammiadream:
so true , so true

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keep dreaming ,reality can handle itself :D
>>> [link] <<<look!
:iconcleril:
As is all my work.

Thank you for reading, I did just edit it, forgot to add something at the end.

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